My little dragon dude ;D

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My little dragon dude ;D

Post by Forgotten-Ragdoll on Thu May 28, 2009 3:09 am

His name is Skart.

Skart 1

Skart 2

Critique is welcome.
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Post by Hyper-Red on Thu May 28, 2009 11:11 pm

You a very talented, but I think you need to work on the eyes a little more. In my opinion, it looks like they never close there eyes for some reason, and they are, like, buldging out of it's head

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Post by Ashley on Fri May 29, 2009 12:41 am

They look like they are bulging out because the pupil is small, Hyper. =P

I love dragons! This one looks more like a dinosaur, but whatever. xD I noticed that his "stomach" is very thin, possibly too thin. Now, maybe it's a stylistic/character trait thing, I'm not sure, but that's one of the first things I noticed.

Also, the joints where the wings first start don't look very sturdy...as in they look like they will snap off any moment. Maybe adding a little more muscle and making it look more attached will help the case. But hey, you can draw wings better than I can, so hey. xD

I really love the realistic look it has, and I love the shading and overall design. It's very well done, I can't wait to see more! =D

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Post by Forgotten-Ragdoll on Fri May 29, 2009 9:31 pm

Thank you. :) I was going for a stylized realism type thing. I do think his midsection is too thin, though.
Thanks for the advice.
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